Melody in Control

Melody always hated her roommate’s boyfriend, so when Kim comes home in tears after finding him in bed with someone else, Melody is happy to have her back. She takes Kim to a nightclub to help her get over the breakup, and decides that what Kim really needs is a good, hard fucking. So, she arranges one, taking charge and controlling not only her friend, but also Tony, the jock who tried his luck and ended up with a lot more than he bargained for.

Later, Melody dominates Kim in a hot girl on girl session featuring her brand new double-ended dildo.

This story of approx. 8,000 words contains very graphic descriptions of m/f and f/f sex.


“Tony,” Melody ordered, “take out your cock.”
Kim snatched her hand back as if electrocuted, while Tony hurriedly obeyed, unzipping his fly and pulling his pants down to reveal a decently-sized cock, almost fully erect now.
“Not bad, Tony,” Melody said with a smile, reaching down and curling her fingers around the shaft. She looked at Kim as she started slowly stroking her hand up and down, quickly bringing Tony to full hardness. “I think you’ll do, nicely.”
Kim seemed almost hypnotized as she passively allowed Melody to take hold of her small hand once more, and place it on Tony’s cock. Melody covered Kim’s tiny hand with hers as she moved it slowly up and down, holding Kim’s hand in place and making her stroke the hot, hard shaft.
Melody reached a fingertip up towards the side of Kim’s face, idly tucking a stray lock of hair back behind her ear as Kim continued, in a daze, to stroke Tony’s cock.
“Isn’t that a lovely cock, Kimmie?” Melody asked. “Say, ‘Yes, Deedee'”, she ordered.
“Yes, Deedee,” Kim breathed, as she watched her hand. The expression on her face said that Kim couldn’t believe that it was actually her own hand doing this – that this hand, as it slowly stroked the rigid shaft, must surely belong to someone else.
“I bet you’d like to feel that hard cock in your mouth, wouldn’t you, Kimmie?” she continued. “Say, ‘Yes, Deedee'”
“Yes, Deedee,” Kim replied, in a robotic monotone.
“Kneel down, Kimmie.”
“Mmm, yes. Do that, Kimmie,” Tony said, in a hoarse voice.
“Shut up, Tony,” said Melody, without changing her tone, or taking her eyes off Kim, who was slowly lowering herself to her knees.
Tony’s mouth closed with an audible snap, making Melody think that maybe he wasn’t quite as dumb as he looked. She gazed down at her friend, whose almond-shaped eyes were very wide as the petite asian girl knelt and stroked Tony’s hard length.
Melody slowly stroked Kim’s hair, smoothing the straight, dark strands and gathering them together, gripping Kim’s hair like a handle as she slowly pushed the kneeling girl’s head forward.
Kim didn’t resist as she let her friend control her, allowing her face to be pushed towards Tony’s cock, her mouth opening as the hard shaft slid between her glistening lips.

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About imogenlinn

I write erotic stories, often with a BDSM twist. I was born in Chicago in the 80s (no, I'm not telling you what year - a girl has to have some secrets). I was always a bit of a wild child. My stories are mostly about good girls who end up submitting to dominant, older men. (Autobiographical? Who, me?) I try to write my sex raunchy, and make the situations and characters believable. For me, if there's no build-up, or I read something and think, "But, she wouldn't do that!" then it kills the experience. I write about encounters and situations that turn me on and get me hot. Some of them are (loosely) based on things that really happened, others are based on things I only wish had happened!
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