Melody in Lingerie

This is short story of approx. 8,000 words.

Melody loves lingerie

It’s the one thing that makes the socially-awkward college girl feel sexy and special.

While out shopping to indulge her secret vice, she meets a charismatic older man who gradually and skilfully seduces her.

During a steamy encounter in the store’s changing room, he brings out her submissive side, and Melody learns to see herself through his eyes.

This, the first volume in the Melody series, is an erotic short story of approx. 8,000 words.

A very steamy and sexy read, with characters that are engaging and fully realized. If you have ever wondered about dom/sub relationship dynamics, or the BDSM lifestyle, this would be a good introduction. Even if you are on the fence, the hot sex and fascinating characters will keep you turning the pages.

– Lilien Detlev, erotica author


Slowly, Melody turned around, certain she could feel the heat of his gaze on her skin.
“Do you like it?”
“I’m not sure about this one. Put on the next set for me.”
Melody’s heart pounded as she considered the set of lingerie which was now at the top of the pile – a tiny, very sheer bra and thong set which would hide absolutely nothing.
It had seemed like a good choice when they were roaming the store earlier. Now, the idea of modeling it for him was both thrilling and daunting, although far less daunting than the thought of refusing him.
Was that the ghost of a smile on his lips as he turned away, this time?
All too quickly, Melody was dressed – if that word could really be applied to a few small triangles of transparent material held together by thin strings.
Melody caught sight of herself in the mirror. As she had feared, the lingerie hid nothing at all. Her traitorously-erect nipples were very visible through the sheer material of the bra, as were the small triangle of hair between her legs, and even the lips of her pussy.
She looked over her shoulder to check the view from behind. If anything, it was even worse. The thin string of the thong panties disappeared completely between the cheeks of her ass, leaving her totally exposed.
Melody was mortified, her cheeks burning with humiliation.
As soon as she told him to turn around and look, she would be utterly exposed before this strange man. If anything, wearing this lingerie was even worse than if she were totally naked. The bra and panties simply drew attention to her most intimate parts, as they were designed to do, she admitted to herself, while hiding nothing.
She knew she should just call the whole thing off. Get dressed again in her sensible jeans and sweatshirt, and just leave. And yet, she knew she wasn’t going to do that.
Something inside of her was responding to this situation – to displaying herself for this stranger, and obeying his commands. Each time he told her to do something in that peremptory tone, an electric thrill coursed through her body, and dressing up (or down) to display herself for him made her feel sexy and proud – especially the gleam she saw in his eyes whenever he looked at her that way.
Still, she trembled with that same combination of fear, excitement and anticipation as she said, making a conscious effort not to cover herself with her arms, “I’m ready.”

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About imogenlinn

I write erotic stories, often with a BDSM twist. I was born in Chicago in the 80s (no, I'm not telling you what year - a girl has to have some secrets). I was always a bit of a wild child. My stories are mostly about good girls who end up submitting to dominant, older men. (Autobiographical? Who, me?) I try to write my sex raunchy, and make the situations and characters believable. For me, if there's no build-up, or I read something and think, "But, she wouldn't do that!" then it kills the experience. I write about encounters and situations that turn me on and get me hot. Some of them are (loosely) based on things that really happened, others are based on things I only wish had happened!
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